October 2022

BREATHE

WORD COUNT: 888 - 8,888

NSFW: Up to M Rating

OBLIGATORY RESTRICTION: Do not depict Elsa and Anna as children below the age of 17

BONUSES

ONE: Token

Give Elsa, Anna or both a token/talisman/charm that they have on their person at all times (or at least a significant amount of time.) The token must be physical and mentioned at least once with an impact on the plot.

TWO: Folklore

Include a reference to a folkloric or mythological tale or creature. The creature/tale needs to be recognizable and unmistakable and be an actual folkloric/mythological element of real world culture.

THREE: Breathing

Include a scene that depicts a change in breathing (slower, faster, shallower etc.) with an emphasis on the physical aspect. The change must occur for Elsa or Anna in a compound, complex or compound-complex sentence that focuses on the physical ‘consequences’ of the change of breathing.

WINNER

Nightmare By Vergasi